In general the essy is well written. As to compossition it has an itroduction,body and conclusion which is positive.It awakes a desire to read further.
Lexics is also not primitive. There is even a turm Routine Destruction Scheme is used (I don't know is it yours but is very good).
As to me the essay could have more points with explanations. But its your own viewpoint so you have a right to think and write in such way.
Some pieces of advice are really usefull. I even use them for me!
Lexics is also not primitive. There is even a turm Routine Destruction Scheme is used (I don't know is it yours but is very good).
As to me the essay could have more points with explanations. But its your own viewpoint so you have a right to think and write in such way.
Some pieces of advice are really usefull. I even use them for me!
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